Update for 8/19/14!

SFW!

Let’s Hateo Kaito Rapeo!

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11 Responses to Update for 8/19/14!

  1. YonYonYon says:

    That’s why you need to put some spaces between panels, Jesus Christ!
    At first I thought that first panel is some kind of, I dunno, airfield, not a separate panel showing how the aorplane is stopping, man!
    AP’s layout is so bad, so bad I’m gonna cry.

  2. Rita says:

    Aw, she shrunk down his nose :(

  3. laila says:

    “HOW’S THE SHITTY GENERIC ACTION-SCENE DIALOG SOUNDING RICK?”
    “SHITTY, YOUR HOTLINESS”
    “ROGER THAT A-OKAY THAT’S A GO WATCH YOUR SIX DELTA ECHO CHARLIE ETA IN TEN-FOUR KLICKS LOCK AND LOAD ALL SYSTEMS GO NOW LET’S ROCK AND ROLL, BITCH”

    • Shitty generic dialog is the fucking bread and butter of this comic.

      • laila says:

        True. Very true. Just can’t help but think that whenever AP leaves her preferred niche – a shitty rip-off of equally shitty domestic-comedy yaoi with seriously unfortunate implications – her work gets exponentially worse. At least she kind-of-but-not-really understands how shitty domestic-comedy yaoi with seriously unfortunate implications is supposed to look. She might not be any good or even vaguely tolerable at what she’s doing, but at least she knows what she’s aiming for.

        With the ‘action’ scenes, she doesn’t even have enough of a grip on the genre to know what it looks like done right. AP can’t even produce a shitty knock-off that doesn’t immediately become a festering cauldron of inept plotting and painful cliches because she’s not even remotely interested in the action scenes except as a means to try to make Red look even more sexy and wonderful. She has absolutely zero interest in action-adventure for its own sake, so she doesn’t even know enough about it to produce a semi-competent ripoff – some tough-guy dialogue, a poorly-choreographed gunfight, a few explosions and she figures she’s good to get back to the stupid rom-com. There’s a lot more to writing even half-decent action sequences than that, but try telling that to someone who clearly thinks she’s above the genre. So her writing becomes cringemakingly shitty instead of just annoyingly bad.

        In short, this next sequence is going to be fucking painful.

        • Her lack of interest in the action shows PAINFULLY OBVIOUS! Everything about the action scenes is just so poorly planned out it’s embarrassing. I tell you what, I had no lack of material to riff in these upcoming scenes.

          Though to be honest, she doesn’t seem to have much interest outside the sex, hence why the setting and everything involving any kind of plot is god awful.

        • Rita says:

          Nail, meet head. Well said Laila.

          Has she explicably said or hinted at that she thinks she’s above the action/adventure genre? Because if so.. wow. The action genre is plagued by a lot of stinkers (sup Michael Bay), but that doesn’t mean the entire genre itself is shit, and in either case she’s in no position to act all high and mighty about it. At least the transformers don’t go around promoting rape culture.
          And call me old fashioned, but I can’t buy the idea of Red being some sort of Bruce Willis esque action hero. Sorry AP, but I have my limits. Also, this is just repeating myself and everybody else, but I am so over him hogging the spotlight. I like literally every other character more than him, and I could see several of them bring something interesting to the table if they were allowed to develop. Jude, Oh Nose up there, Tits McGee, hell even Blue. But as you said, everything and everyone in this story gets treated as nothing more than props to showcase how awesome and BAMF Red is. It’s like all of those lame self insert fics, only instead of wanking over the insert they’re wanking over their ideal guy.
          herp fucking derp

      • laila says:

        “How’s the ammo looking, Rick?!”
        “It’s shiny, cylindrical and tapers to a point. Why? Haven’t you seen ammunition before?”

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