Update for 11/29/14!

SFW!

Let’s Hateo Kaito Rapeo!

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6 Responses to Update for 11/29/14!

  1. Anonymous says:

    uuugggh i remember this entire scene and i’m so not ready for this dumb bullshit again

  2. laila says:

    So I read that scene from ‘Tyrant’ someone linked to in yesterday’s comments and DEAR GOD THIS IS BASICALLY AN EXACT FREAKING RIP-OFF OF IT. Not to mention it makes precisely zero sense in the context of what’s been previously established about Stu-no as a character. Yeah, sure the hardened killer and former kiddie bum-fight champion is so grievously wounded in the feels that he’d just up and start crying in his boyfriend’s sister’s bathroom because it’s been a full two pages since the last bit of nonsensical wangst and oh noes I am allergic to teh happy. Absolutely no fuckin’ reason this character wouldn’t do this. None at all. Nope.

    Seriously, this is bloody awful writing. What kind of lame-ass excuse for coherent characterization is going on here when the regulars just do whatever the fuck AP thinks would be the most dramatic at any given moment and damn what she’s previously told us about them? At least in ‘Tyrant’ the resident rapist douchebag was established as having a serious self-pity problem long before he started crying in the bathroom but this, for Stu-no, comes completely out of left field. It’s happening because AP read ‘Tyrant’ and thinks it would be cool if she did this too. That’s it.

    • cc says:

      I imagine this is how the AP writing goes:
      CRYING IS DRAMATIC EMOTION.

      rape SEX IS INTIMATE EMOTION.

      BLUSH IS LOVE.

    • Lurker says:

      Isn’t it though? I get being inspired by other people’s works but come on!

      Maybe it should be considered promising that this was the scene AP liked enough to plagiarize? I still think it’s one of the better scenes in a story that is otherwise basically about how rape your way out of the friendzone. Then again, her choice of scene doesn’t really reflect too well on her taste when she’s already using a ton of problematic rape tropes, some of which are probably ripped off of Tyrant as well.

      If you’re shit at writing but want to do it for fun anyway, at least come up with your own shitty material instead of badly incorporating others’ into your shitty “plot.”

      • cc says:

        AP is very good at copying things, I mean look at all the sameface, why would she ever stop just at the art when there is writing too?

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